I started writing this story back in August 2006. Part one is written badly, and I'm currently rewriting it and
adding more detail into it. It was an expereimental story, that I didn't realize would become this big.
The end of Part 2 is ok, but part 3 is definatly better then both 1 and 2. Part four promises
to be equally as good as three.
Part Three
Part Four
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